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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Vision: You're a very talented artist and I like to look at your artwork.
Originality: I've seen this idea tossed around a lot, so to me it's not that original.
Technique: The hair especially is just gorgeous. However, I don't think you did too well on the lighting. I think that the parts of her body closest to us would be shielded from the moon, causing much darker shadow. As far as I'm concerned, you put WAY too much lightning in certain areas. The moon is bright, but I don't believe it's THAT bright. Also, what's with the buildings at different perspectives (this is a serious question)? Are they triangular? Also, the buildings from the right--their windows look... Saggy. I think they could learn a thing or two from the ones on the left.
Impact: Overall, this is a gorgeous piece and I love all the effects.
NOTE: I am not a professional and I don't claim that title. These are just a few things I thought and I could easily be wrong. Thanks for sharing your artwork with us. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>